Love how it has various endpoints, which keep the users engaged through all the possible routes. I finally won on my fifth try! Whoohoo! One small comment I want to say will be the color of your letters, its sometimes hard to read with the black background.
Love how the game was framed with choices often naturally appearing through out the text. The mystery kept me playing and was written very well but the ending about forgetting that I signed up for an experiment felt a little out of place since the rest of the story felt so engaging. I don't think the fact that it was an experiment or amnesia was off putting but rather the bases for joining an experiment with as broad of a end goal as putting you through some sort of life changing experience make me wonder what sort of person I was and why they would have joined such an odd experiment. Could be interesting to add more odd hints to a possible past or a moment where I feel a disconnect with the person I'm playing as for another possible piece of tension that narratively links back to the ending.
I lost a few times at first, which I appreciate because it adds depth to the game. As the game goes on, the tension keeps building up. The script is so well written. It might be helpful to us to read better if the first letter in the sentence can be capitalized. Adding mysterious music might be cool too!
I love the engaging storyline and input textbox for players to type in their names. The simple black and cyan color theme, with different options emphasized in bold font, also shows the attention to detail of this game.
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I really enjoyed this interactive fiction. Thanks for writing it and sharing your vision. 😊
thank you so much!
Love how it has various endpoints, which keep the users engaged through all the possible routes. I finally won on my fifth try! Whoohoo! One small comment I want to say will be the color of your letters, its sometimes hard to read with the black background.
Amazing game.
Love how the game was framed with choices often naturally appearing through out the text. The mystery kept me playing and was written very well but the ending about forgetting that I signed up for an experiment felt a little out of place since the rest of the story felt so engaging. I don't think the fact that it was an experiment or amnesia was off putting but rather the bases for joining an experiment with as broad of a end goal as putting you through some sort of life changing experience make me wonder what sort of person I was and why they would have joined such an odd experiment. Could be interesting to add more odd hints to a possible past or a moment where I feel a disconnect with the person I'm playing as for another possible piece of tension that narratively links back to the ending.
I lost a few times at first, which I appreciate because it adds depth to the game. As the game goes on, the tension keeps building up. The script is so well written. It might be helpful to us to read better if the first letter in the sentence can be capitalized. Adding mysterious music might be cool too!
I love the engaging storyline and input textbox for players to type in their names. The simple black and cyan color theme, with different options emphasized in bold font, also shows the attention to detail of this game.